Thursday, July 28, 2016

September Class at The Writer's Center

Announcing my new workshop at The Writer’s Center: Building Better Characters:

Tuesday, September 20, 2016
1:00 PM-4:00 PM
1 day

This is a very hands-on class, based on an extended exercise I conducted this summer at Converse, and we had excellent results.

Here’s the description:

How does the writer create believable characters with depth and complexity? This interactive, hands-on workshop will guide you through a fun and thorough research process, teaching you how to ensure that your characters—whether literary or genre—will pop on the page. Because we’re doing some online research, you will need a smartphone/laptop along with paper/pen.

Registration/more information:

Monday, July 25, 2016

Interview in The Rumpus!

I was interviewed for The Saturday Rumpus interview by one of my fabulous, former Hopkins students, Tyrese Coleman, who came up with such insightful, smart questions about the lines between blurring fact and fiction that I was really sweating my answers….but here’s a tease:


Rumpus: Most writers acknowledge the moral and ethical implications of sticking to the truth when we say a piece of writing is nonfiction, but do you believe that same moral and ethical responsibility exists when you make a claim that a piece of writing is fiction? If there are obligations concerning fiction, what are they? 

Pietrzyk: Before writing this book, I would have said that my only obligation as a fiction writer is to the story, to make it good, so good the busy reader doesn’t feel that flipping those pages was a waste of time. And I still believe that. But maybe there’s more. Even in fiction, you want to be mindful of the people in your life and of your responsibility in portraying either them or their roles (in my particular case here, for example, “second husband” or “mother-in-law”). A lot of people lost Robb, not just me—and even fictionally, I wanted to be gentle with them while staying true to the story I needed to tell. So my obligations as a fiction writer have grown to include always being hardest on myself. I focused on the “young widow” figure, having her do the worst things (i.e. sleeping with her brother-in-law, being cruel to the mother-in-law) knowing that I would and could handle any flak or emotional fallout. Readers may think those incidents are in the “true” side of the equation of the book, and that’s a risk I’m taking—for myself. I could have drawn in other “true” people from Robb’s life, but that didn’t seem fair to me since they didn’t ask to be part of this highly personal book. (Maybe this kindness keeps me off Team CNF?)

  



Tuesday, July 12, 2016

Working on a Novel?

Consider this year-long class at the Writer’s Center (in Bethesda) to help you finish that draft. Susan Coll will guide your efforts in this workshop dedicated to novels and the novel biz. I know she’s one of my friends, so perhaps I’m not entirely unbiased, but she is smart and compassionate and organized and generous…in short, everything I would want in a teacher.

Here’s the write-up, followed by the link for pricing information and registration:

Time: 7:00-9:30
Dates: 9/15/2016–8/31/2017
Location: Bethesda
Genre(s): Fiction

Workshop Leader: Susan Coll
Fall: September 15 - December 8
Winter/Spring: January 12 - April 13
Summer: Individual monthly check-ins with instructor, June – August

This twelve-month program is intended to support serious novelists looking to revise and pitch their novels. Novel Year participants will experience the rigor and structure of an M.F.A. program, but with less of an expense and time commitment. 

Working with a published novelist, ten participants will workshop their entire novel-in-progress. Other benefits include:
•Consistent writing deadlines, studying aspects of craft, and being part of a supportive community •Panels and Q&As with experts in the industry, including literary agents and visiting writers •Free access to the Studio at The Writer’s Center during the full year (valued at $1,000) •Free admission to literary events at the Center •Being a featured reader (reading works-in-progress) at the 2017 Bethesda Literary Festival


Participants must have completed at least 150 pages of a novel before enrolling. To be admitted into the program, potential candidates will need to submit:
•A one-page cover letter detailing their interest in the program. •A twenty-five page writing sample from their novel in progress. (Submissions must be double spaced and use a standard font.)
Admissions will be on a rolling basis, and the number of participants will be limited to ten, so participants are encouraged to submit early.


Susan Coll’s website: http://susancoll.com/




Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Link Corral: The Business Side of the Writing Biz

Link Corral: The Business Side of the Writing Biz

I’m sharing three links to recent pieces I read and FBed, each about some important aspect of the business side of the writing life.

Everything You Wanted to Know about Book Sales (But Were Afraid to Ask)
An In-Depth Look at What/How/Why Books Sell

…Earlier this year, there was a round of excited editorials about how print is back, baby after industry reportsshowed print sales increasing for the second consecutive year. However, the growth was driven almost entirely by non-fiction sales… more specifically adult coloring books and YouTube celebrity memoirs. As great as adult coloring books may be, their sales figures tell us nothing about the sales of, say, literary fiction. This lack of knowledge leads to plenty of confusion for writers when they do sell a book. Are they selling well? What constitutes good sales? Should they start freaking out when their first $0.00 royalty check comes in? Writers should absolutely write with an eye toward art, not markets. Thinking about sales while creating art rarely produces anything good. But I’m still naïve enough to think that knowledge is always better than ignorance, and that after the book is written, writers should come to publishing with a basic understanding of what is going on. …

BUILDING UP TO EMERGING: TIPS FOR APPLYING TO FELLOWSHIPS, RESIDENCIES AND WORKSHOPS

The first time I applied for a fellowship was in spring 2009. I was about to finish grad school, and I sent out a slew of applications like I was applying for a PhD. I figured it was the next logical step as I readied myself to move beyond my MFA program, and I had the mentors close by to help. I gathered transcripts and letters of recommendation, curated samples of work and wrote project proposals. I remember one mentor agreed to write a letter with what I perceived as little enthusiasm. When all the rejections came in that summer, I read the bios of those who won and took notice of all their previous awards and accolades. I thought back to that mentor and considered her lackluster support the response of someone who understood the literary world better than I did at that time. 
See what I learned from this experience was that “emerging” doesn’t mean new like I thought it did, but more as the Merriam-Webster dictionary defines, “becoming widely known or established.” …..


13 QUESTIONS TO ASK BEFORE SUBMITTING TO A LITERARY JOURNAL

A writer friend recently asked me a brief but not-so-simple question: How do you decide where to send your work?
 In other words: Faced with seemingly infinite lists, calls for submissions, classified ads, databases, and fair-and-festival tables, how do I select which journals and magazines to send my work to with the hope that, after editorial review, my pages may indeed find proverbial “homes” online and/or in print?...





Friday, July 1, 2016

WHAT WE TALK ABOUT WHEN WE TALK ABOUT CREATIVE WRITING: New Book on CW in the Academy

It’s a pleasure to announce an important new academic book that focuses on the role of creative writing in the academy. [Disclosure: I know the editor, Anna Leahy. Further disclosure: I am featured in one of the essays on the book, talking about different approaches to graduate creative writing program, using the Converse low-res MFA as my model.] Beyond all those disclosures, however, is the serious issue of where creative writing fits into the university and college system, and how can we better teach this craft we love? Anna’s approach to the subject—collaborative conversation essays that felt to me like dialogue that gets stirred up after a rousing panel at the AWP conference—is refreshing yet comprehensive. I could only include a small selection of the contents below, but scroll through, and I know you’ll have questions, opinions, and ideas on each of these topics…and that you’ll want to ask your university library to acquire a copy of this book pronto.


WHAT WE TALK ABOUT WHEN WE TALK ABOUT CREATIVE WRITING
Edited by Anna Leahy (Chapman University)
Published by Multilingual Matters

Quick description:
This innovative edited collection pushes boundaries in both content and form. It discusses how new ways of knowing and doing scholarship produced in Creative Writing departments can make a contribution to a wider academic community and emphasizes the value of personal reflection and sharing stories.

Pre-pub praise:
“Dialogue, experiment, variety… These are at the heart of Creative Writing pedagogy, and reading this book is like eavesdropping on the process at work. Coming straight from the workface of American universities, it raises questions both practical and theoretical, creative and critical, that animate this growing and evolving discipline worldwide.” ~Philip Gross, University of South Wales, UK

Adaptation of one of the essays, in Brevity: https://brevity.wordpress.com/2016/05/30/on-selfish-reading/

“As we were constructing the conversation essay about writerly reading in What We Talk about When We Talk about Creative Writing, Suzanne Greenberg challenged me—all of us—to think of reading as guiding our students to fall in love with writing. Never before had I thought of matchmaking between writer and book (or individual poem, story, essay) as a fruitful way to view teaching.”


Among the authors and topics covered:
~Cathy Day, Anna Leahy and Stephanie Vanderslice: Where Are We Going in Creative Writing Pedagogy?

~Anna Leahy and Larissa Szporluk: Good Counsel: Creative Writing, the Imagination, and Teaching

~Anna Leahy, Leslie Pietrzyk, Mary Swander and Amy Sage Webb: More than the Sum of Our Parts: Variety in Graduate Programs

~Katharine Haake, Anna Leahy and Argie Manolis: The Bold and the Beautiful: Rethinking Undergraduate Models

~Dianne Donnelly, Tom C. Hunley, Anna Leahy, Tim Mayers, Dinty W. Moore and Stephanie Vanderslice: Creative Writing (Re)Defined

~Mary Cantrell, Rachel Hall, Anna Leahy and Audrey Petty: Peas in a Pod: Trajectories of Educations and Careers

~Nicole Cooley, Kate Greenstreet, Nancy Kuhl and Anna Leahy: The First Book

~Karen Craigo and Anna Leahy: Taking the Stage, Stage Fright, Center Stage: Careers Over Time

BIO: Anna Leahy is Associate Professor of English, Associate Director of the MFA in Creative Writing, and Director of Undergraduate Research and Creative Activity at Chapman University, USA. She has published widely on creative writing pedagogy, as well as creative non-fiction and poetry. She is the editor of TAB: The Journal of Poetry & Poetics.




Wednesday, June 29, 2016

FREE Fiction Workshop Open to the Public @ GWU; App Deadline 8/23

This free writing workshop, endowed in honor of Jenny McKean Moore and open to all, is one of the great benefits for writers in the DC area. I participated in a workshop taught by Carole Maso back in the olden days and loved it! Note: apps are due on August 23. 

George Washington University presents:

Jenny McKean Moore Free Community Workshop Fall 2016 – Fiction Workshop

TUESDAYS, 7:00 – 9:00 p.m.
6 September 2016 – 6 December 2016
Led by Melinda Moustakis

Come and take part in a semester-long fiction workshop! To apply, you do not need academic qualifications or publications. The class will include some readings of published writings (primarily memoir and the personal essay), but will mainly be a roundtable critique of work submitted by class members. There are no fees to participate in the class, but you will be responsible for making enough copies of your stories for all fifteen participants. Students at Consortium schools (including GWU) are not eligible.

To apply, please submit a brief letter of interest and a sample of your writing, 12 pt type, double spaced, and no more than 7 pages in length. Make sure you include your name, address, home and work telephone numbers, and email address for notification.

Application materials will not be returned, but will be recycled once the selection process is completed. Applications must be received at the following address by close of business on Tuesday, 23 August 2016.

JMM Fiction Workshop
Department of English
The George Washington University
801 22nd Street, NW (Phillips 643)
Washington, DC 20052

All applicants will be notified by email of the outcome of their submissions no later than Saturday, 3 September 2016.


Melinda Moustakis is the 2016-2017 Jenny McKean Moore Writer-in-Washington at The George Washington University. She is the author of Bear Down, Bear North: Alaska Stories, which won the Flannery O’Connor Award and was a 5 Under 35 selection by the National Book Foundation. Her work has appeared in American Short Fiction, Alaska Quarterly Review, Granta, Kenyon Review and elsewhere. She is the recipient of an O. Henry Prize, a Hodder Fellowship from The Lewis Center of the Arts at Princeton University, an NEA Fellowship in Fiction, and a Kenyon Review Fellowship. 

Monday, June 20, 2016

Robin Gaines, Author of INVINCIBLE SUMMERS: "a dream and some magic and a lot of hard work and loads of patience"

I love a good story with a happy ending! I met writer Robin Gaines several years ago when she was in the beginning of her writing career, and I read some of her early work in progress. You know how they say you just know you’re in love? Well, I just knew I was in love with her stories about Claudia growing up in 1960s-1970s era Detroit. And I just knew they would coalesce at some point into a book…and now they have, and here is Robin’s novel, INVINCIBLE SUMMERS! So I had to catch up with her and hear the epic journey of the book, and I do mean “epic”: as you’ll see below, at one point this book was shoved into the drawer, abandoned.

A bit more about the novel, from Robin’s website:

After returning home from burying her father on Independence Day, ten-year-old Claudia Goodwin watches from the kitchen window as neighbors drag picnic tables and coolers into the middle of the street to celebrate the holiday. How, Claudia wonders, will she fit into this new fatherless world with the old one still going on around her?

 INVINCIBLE SUMMERS follows Claudia through eleven summers, from the age of six through twenty-three, as she adjusts with varying degrees of success to what it means to be a daughter, a sister, friend, and lover in a world of loss, betrayal and bad judgment.

And some pre-release praise:

“…Gaines has created an unforgettable character in Claudia, but by following her through eleven years of her life, she shows us how each one of us is many characters throughout a single lifetime….  At the end of this novel, we’ve lived alongside of Claudia, and the world’s many mysteries, and those of the human heart, have been laid bare.  This is the kind of reading experience for which literature was invented.”
~Laura Kasischke, recipient of the National Book Critics Circle Award for Poetry, 2012, for Space, in Chains


“INVINCIBLE SUMMERS explores the agony of family. …Gaines deftly manages that loss and the way it floats through time—not shrinking but morphing, not fading but fusing to all of Claudia’s experiences. …This is no simplistic tale of self-discovery, nor is it a dirge. It is, in Claudia’s own words, a restless search for nowhere fueled by moments of whimsy, humor, and hope. …”
~John Mauk, author of The Rest of Us and Field Notes for the Earthbound
  
And now the main event, Robin’s responses to a few questions about the writing process, life without an MFA, writing tips, and that epic journey of abandonment and redemption:


I’ve stolen this question from an interview someone did with me: Describe your book in 10 words or less. (I’ll spot you the words of the title!)

Invincible Summers follows Claudia’s journey through father loss, misunderstandings, hope, and forgiveness.


You don’t have an MFA in creative writing, which I know many people will find refreshing and interesting. Can you talk about your approach to studying the craft of writing since it didn’t involve graduate school?

After graduating college with a business degree I’ve never used I worked peripherally in the music business as a box office manager, assistant to a band’s manager (glorified secretary), and as a tour logistics coordinator all while writing concert reviews and interviewing rock bands for newspapers and magazines in the 1980s. I went back to school and got a master’s degree in journalism and worked briefly as a research intern for Rolling Stone magazine—my dream job. They offered me a position at the end of my glorious five-month stint in New York City, but unfortunately (or fortunately!!!) my husband was in the midst of starting his own business in Michigan, and I chose a life with him instead of Rolling Stone. Life is a series of what ifs!

Writing fiction came late for me. I’ve always been a big reader but never thought I could create a fictional world until I read somewhere that writing fiction was like interpreting a dream. Dream interpretation, heck yeah! I wish I remembered who said that or where I read it because it gave me the permission I needed to work at the craft. I got started by studying other writers’ work.

After reading a short story I admired or loved I’d type it out verbatim to pick up the rhythms, structures, and nuances in the stories. Then I would deconstruct the stories doing a kind of copy and paste thing. I’d apply (or at least try to) some of the same elements in my own stories, which were more Raymond Carver-esque early on. When I started to get some recognition locally through writing contests, I got the courage to send out work to journals. One of those early stories became the genesis for Invincible Summers.  

I think the disadvantage of not pursuing an MFA in creative writing is how lonely it felt in not having a community of writers to commiserate with, to get feedback from, and to partake in the general camaraderie in cheering one another on. In journalism, the editor sends your copy back to cut or re-write or add to, and there’s immediate evaluation of the work. Writers of fiction, as Jayne Anne Phillips writes in her sublime essay Outlaw Heart, “Writers focus perpetually on the half-seen, and we live in the dim or glorious shadows of partially apprehended shapes.” In other words, that dream-like quality that got me into the mess of writing fiction in the first place has been the hardest for me to get on the page, at least the way I see and hear it in my head. 

Reading taught me to write. With each book I read, I learn something new about the craft. Sometimes it’s not to do A, B or C, but most times it's oh, I am so stealing that structure or the beautiful rhythm of that sentence.

Since my early days, I’ve workshopped stories and chapters at different writing conferences and have been involved in a writing critique group of MFA graduates for the past several years. I’ve found my tribe, and that has helped tremendously with new work.


Plot or characters? Which comes first for you? Or is it something else?

Definitely characters. The physical being of at least one or two of them morphs from jiggly plasma into fleshed human beings with thoughts and feelings. This happens when I can hear their voice(s). Once I hear them conversing with themselves or each other, I move them around in my head until I settle on a scene. Then I ask what do they want from one another? What do they want from themselves?

I surprise myself sometimes writing, as when Claudia pushes Carrie off the airplane wing in the skydiving scene in Invincible Summers. Or in the novel I’m working on now when one of the characters uses an undiagnosed illness to manipulate a marriage. But always I know how it’s going to end for the characters—or at least I visualize the last scene when they’re all speaking or thinking or doing something. I write the ending in my head before I sit down to construct the first line of the story or the book. Which, I guess, in talking to other writers about craft is kind of strange? Some, I know, like the mystery of where the story will take them. I like a map of where I’m headed. It doesn’t mean I won’t take the occasional side trip, but I know where the road eventually ends.

(As a side note, I was mesmerized by the endings of each story in This Angel on My Chest. Brava! I love a good ending, and yours were exquisite.) 
EDITOR’S NOTE: Well…how could I edit this out? J


I think about revision a lot, and how that magic can happen when moving between drafts. What is your revision process?

Revision is magical. I wouldn’t have thought so until I went back to the beginning and read the manuscript as a reader. And then out loud. Most beginning writers, me included, are just happy to get to The End, and the idea of going over it again, and again, and again seems torturous.

Through rewrites what I found in the maze of the work were patterns and themes and symbols I didn’t intentionally write to. In several of the stories or chapters in Invincible Summers the narrator, Claudia, is traveling to or from someplace either on foot, or by car, train, plane, ferry, or bus. In the chapters she’s not moving toward something Claudia feels stuck, and she spies on the neighbors and steals and plots against her family.

On a second or third rewrite, I uncovered a thread of miscommunication between the characters throughout the manuscript. Again, I didn’t plan these miscommunications—well, maybe one when Claudia finally makes it to Corfu only to find Elliot has left the island. It’s interesting to see how the silence in the Goodwin family catapults Claudia’s behavior. That was a complete surprise.

Rewriting seems to bring me to the work faster in the morning as opposed to sitting down and starting with a blank page. So, there’s that magic, too.


What was your road to publication?

Fraught with potholes, quicksand, and wrong turns. Seriously, if you’re reading this, hooray! Invincible Summers has finally birthed into the world. I will drop to my knees when I finally have the finished copy in my hands.

I’m not sure about other authors’ journeys to see their book in print, but I would love to compare notes.

I finished the book in 2008 and after several rewrites, I sent it out to 10-15 agents in the fall. Two were interested after reading the manuscript. One was one of my dream agents. Sadly, she passed on the book when the publishing world flipped upside down and selling a novel-in-stories to a publisher seemed an insurmountable task. The other agent, at a well-known boutique agency, was young and with less experience but passionate about the book and took me on as a client until something happened in her personal and professional life and she decided to leave agenting and go back to school. Other agents told me to put the manuscript in a drawer until my next book, “a real novel,” was finished. The idea was to approach publishers with two books instead of one. So, like a good lapsed Catholic girl, I did what I was told and put my dream in a drawer. And Invincible Summers sadly stayed in the dark for three years while I worked on other projects.

Until the summer of 2013 when I read in Poets & Writers about open manuscript submissions for The Iowa Short Fiction & John Simmons Short Fiction Award for 2014. I was notified in January 2014 that Invincible Summers was a semi-finalist. From that letter, I sent the manuscript to indie publishers and found out in January (might be my lucky month) of 2015 that ELJ Editions wanted to publish my book in the summer of 2016!

So, here I am [at this writing,] waiting to hold that finished book in my hands and share it with the world. It all starts with a dream and some magic and a lot of hard work and loads of patience. Oh, the waiting. Like an elephant’s pregnancy.

EDITOR’S NOTE: The book is out now!!!!!!!!


More information about Robin: http://www.robingaines.net/











Work-in-Progress

DC-area author Leslie Pietrzyk explores the creative process and all things literary.