South 85, the online journal of the Converse low-residency
MFA program, is holding its first-ever writing contest…for flash fiction. First
prize is $500 and the deadline is August 15, 2018. Blind submissions only, and
here are the rest of the details:
NC-area novelist and writer Leslie Pietrzyk on the creative process and all things literary.
Monday, June 25, 2018
Monday, June 18, 2018
Essentials of the Writing Life: Gratitude
This is not one of those posts where I talk about how lucky
and grateful I am (though I most certainly am lucky and grateful). Instead,
this is a post where I (gently?) suggest that expressing gratitude to others is
part of the responsibility of being a good literary citizen.
It’s not as though these are the only ways to express
gratitude, but these are some of my practices:
1.
Thank the editors who publish your work. An
email is fine, but a handwritten note is even more notable (if you can find a mailing
address!). Did someone read a zillion manuscripts to select yours? Did someone
take time to offer suggestions that improved your work? Did someone correct
your typos? Did someone tweet about the new issue? Did someone do all of these
things for no or little pay?
2.
Thank your teachers. A spoken thank you is fine,
an email is better, and a handwritten note is a true gift. Did your teacher
spend a lot of time reviewing your manuscript and making notations? Did your
teacher spend time preparing a class that was smart and logical and organized?
Did your teacher treat you as a writer, as a professional? Did your teacher do
this for (trust me!) never enough pay? (And here’s my plug for a special thanks
for those teachers who work on your thesis. No one’s going to say no to a
small, thoughtful gift!)
3.
Thank your community. A spoken thank you from
time to time is fine, an email is better, and a mention in your book’s
acknowledgments is the best of all. As you write, try to keep a running list
(no, that’s not going to jinx whether the book will be published or not;
instead it’s a way to be reminded of how many people are rooting for you; also,
on a dark day, it’s a pleasant fantasy to envision those names in print). Spell
people’s names correctly. Spread a wide net: it’s FREE to say thank you in
print.
4.
Thank anyone and everyone who organized an event
you participated in, whether you were the headline speaker or you were a paid
participant. I promise you that behind each five minutes of “event time” lurk a
million phone calls/emails/stressed-out-moments/worry-nightmares/meetings/misunderstandings-needing-to-be-straightened-out/on-the-fly-decisions/etc.
Thank that head person who everyone sees on stage with the mic, and also thank
those behind-the-scenes people holding clipboards. Thank your fellow
panelists/moderator/reader/attendees. A spoken thank you is fine, but if you
want to be invited back to speak, a written thank you will be special.
5.
Thank editors and agents who go out of their way
to offer constructive advice via a personal rejection. They are busy-busy-busy
and they don’t have to offer their thoughts to you. I bet they will remember
you. And thank agents/editors you meet via pitch sessions. A thank you note is
really going to stand out amidst the tide of query letters. (Obviously, special
thanks to YOUR editor and agent! But everyone knows this already, right?)
6.
Thank people who write letters of recommendation
or suggest you send something to their agent or who say “use my name” at XYZ
literary journal. Spoken or email is fine, but best of all is to turn around
and be the person who will write letters and offer connections. (Special thanks
to anyone who writes a blurb…again, no one’s going to say no to a small,
thoughtful gift!)
7.
Thank the people who host you at writing
residencies, the people who have the titles printed on business cards but also
the people who clean the rooms and landscape those pretty grounds and manage
the paperwork. Spoken is fine, but a follow-up note will stand out. When your
book comes out, if it’s appropriate, send along a signed copy for their library.
8.
Thank bookstores that carry your book. Thank
bloggers who promote your book on their blogs. Thank writers who interview you.
Thank librarians who put your book in their newsletter.
9.
Thank readers. Thank audiences. Thank anyone who
forked out money to buy your book or hauled themselves to the library to check
out your book or anyone who spent time reading your book or your story or your
poem. I think we all know that there are countless other things these people
could be doing with their time/energy/money, and they chose YOU. Wow. Is that living
the dream or what?
10. Thank
your family, either the biological folks or the family you’ve created. They
didn’t ask to be dragged into the writing life, and they are making sacrifices,
too, whether it’s being written about or taking up the slack at home or shifting
finances so you can enter that contest or a thousand other things that families
do. They are doing these things because they love you, but also they deserve
thanks. A hug is fine, but spoken is best. Let them know that you see how they
are contributing to your pursuit of your art.
11. Thank
writers just for being writers. Send an email to the author of a book you love
(don’t get hung up on getting a response or the “right” response). Thank them
by writing a review of their book on Amazon or giving it 5 stars on Goodreads.
Thank them by telling your friends/book club/relatives about their book. Thank
them by reading widely and deeply and appreciating those hard-fought words;
thank them by closing a book in the deep heart of the night as you sigh and
think, “This.”
Monday, May 28, 2018
Join My Prompt Class at Politics & Prose Bookstore on 6/13!
I’ll be offering another, all-new section of my
popular Right Brain Writing prompt classes at Politics & Prose bookstore in
DC (Connecticut Ave branch) on Wednesday, June 13. I’d love to see you there…we
have a lot of fun, and get some really interesting writing down on the page.
Right Brain
Writing: The Art of Losing
Wednesday, June 13
6:30 p.m.– 9 p.m.
Explore your creative side in this session, one of
a series of stand-alone classes with prompts designed to get your subconscious
flowing. Through guided exercises, we’ll focus on writing about the variety of
losses we have encountered in our lives, the large and small absences that
inform our landscape. Elizabeth Bishop calls it “the art of losing”; where is
the art in saying goodbye? No writing experience necessary! This is a great
class for beginners and also for those fiction writers and/or memoirists with
more experience who might be stuck in their current projects and are looking
for a jolt of inspiration. Our
goal is to have fun in a supportive, nurturing environment and to go home with
several promising pieces to work on further.
Please bring lots of paper and pen/pencil or a fully charged computer. Note:
new exercises!
The Vintage Book of Contemporary American Poetry
edited by J.D. McClatchy
*Please note: Though this is a poetry book, you
are not required to write poetry.
Friday, May 18, 2018
"Cancer Cowboys" & Ticking Clocks: An Interview with Tim Wendel by Mary Kay Zuravleff
I had the
pleasure of reading twice recently with author Tim Wendel and hearing about his
new book, Cancer Crossings: A Brother, His Doctors, and the Quest for a Cure to
Childhood Leukemia. Tim has a wonderful way of speaking about his
work, and I was fascinated to learn more about early cancer research and the
controversy surrounding medical practices now taken for granted. Naturally, I wanted to
hear more! So I’m pleased to present this interview with Tim conducted by
author Mary Kay Zuravleff:
*****
Tim
is the author of THIRTEEN books, which include novels inspired by Cuba,
baseball, Cuban baseball, and World War II, nonfiction books, and even young
adult books. He’s an incredibly versatile writer, who’s been a celebrated journalist
as well as a beloved writing professor in the Johns Hopkins M.A. program. His
latest book, Cancer Crossings: A Brother, His Doctors, and the Quest for a Cure to
Childhood Leukemia is an amazing,
sad, uplifting tale of his family’s loss to leukemia of his brother, Eric, back
in the late 60s. He was the fourth of six kids, and Tim is the oldest, the
first-born. From the book cover: “Part family memoir and part medical
narrative, Cancer Crossings explores
how the Wendel family found the courage to move ahead with their lives.”
David Maraniss has called your work
“a winning mix of science, biography
and mythology,” which aptly describes this book. How did you weave together the science,
biography, and mythology? (For example, you brought back the memory of when
people wouldn’t even say the word “cancer,” which was part of its mythology.)
First, David is being very kind. He’s been a great friend of my work,
along with Ken Burns, David Granger, Frank Deford, Cathy Alter and so many
others over the years. Always great to have folks like that in your camp.
As a writer, I dislike being pigeon-holed. For example, some say I’m just
a baseball writer. OK, I do enjoy the game and it plays well on the page, but
I’ve done a nonfiction book (Summer of
’68) and a novel (Castro’s Curveball)
with the sport as the backdrop and they play out very differently. In the case
of Summer of ’68, I moved sports to
the foreground during one of the most tumultuous periods in our nation’s
history. With Curveball, the conceit was what if Fidel Castro had pursued
baseball more seriously? If so, the world as we know it would have been much
different.
So, I think you’re keeping an eye out for those connections, places where
different elements come into contact. In my new book, Cancer Crossings: A Brother, His Doctors and the Quest to Cure
Childhood Leukemia, I needed to find the places where the treatment of my
brother Eric for leukemia intersected with the procedures and new philosophy of
the so-called “cancer cowboys” – the doctors who took this form of cancer from
a death sentence to a 90 percent cure rate. Once you open yourself up to such
possibilities, there are many more than you realize at first.
Your brother Eric was first
diagnosed with leukemia in 1966, when he was three years old. And his story is
a tale of miracles and also just-missed opportunities. Because his diagnosis
came at the turning point from doctors seeing their duty as offering palliative
care and aggressively experimenting with drug combinations to put leukemia into
remission. Tell us about the prognosis then and what it would be like now for a
child with his diagnosis?
The odds
of a child surviving acute lymphoblastic leukemia, which is the form of cancer
my brother had, have been greatly improved. My daughter Sarah was at Georgetown
Medical School when I began Cancer
Crossings. She’s the one who pointed out that the survival rate went from
10 percent to 90 percent during the 1970s. That really turned my head and I
went in search of this small group of doctors who did it. Many were in their
mid to late 80s by then. And when they told me how much opposition they faced
from the medical community, how they were called killers, poison pushers,
misfits and, yes, cancer cowboys because they dared to try something different
when it came to leukemia, well, I was hooked. I had the elements of a family
memoir and a medical detective story. And with the latter, there was fierce
opposition to what the cancer cowboys were trying to do. Until this point, many
in the medical community refused to take on cancer. It was that daunting. But
the cancer cowboys pushed ahead and many of the advances we take for granted
today – chemotherapy cocktails, the blood centrifuge machine, etc. – are a
result of their work.
Your parents’ response to his first
remission was to buy a big old sailboat for their family of six children and to
not only go for sails but to sail all the way across Lake Ontario, from Buffalo
to Toronto, an a Saturday and sail back home on Sunday. You wrote in Psychology
Today that “We coped with my brother's
struggle against leukemia by doing instead of talking.” Tell us how that
seemed then and how it seems now, as a parent, looking back on your family’s
response?
Few things make you feel as vulnerable as becoming a parent. The core
emotion is you want to protect this new being you’ve brought into the world. To
realize, decades later, that my parents also dared to have family adventures,
even with a kid with leukemia in tow, kind of blew my mind. My parents taught
us to really live in the present. We jammed as much as we could into every day.
We sailed to the far horizon on Lake Ontario, which is a huge body of water, in
the summers, and skated and played hockey in the winters. They let their son
with ALL play hockey? Kind of crazy isn’t it? But it all kind of worked and us
kids learned so much in the process. For example, my father made sure we knew
how to read the wind, to realize that it’s always changing direction and
velocity. Of course, that makes you a better sailor, but it’s also a great way
to look at life. In a way, Cancer Crossings
focuses on my parents when they were at their best, and that’s a good thing for
any kid to be reminded of.
I always tell my students to be
mindful of having a clock in their book, and you have many ticking time bombs
in yours. Of course, there’s Eric’s illness. On the other end, a kinder clock,
is your own daughter in medical school
learning about those pivotal years that changed the outcome for leukemia
patients. What was that like, her bringing you that discovery?
I knew I
needed to do right by this request. My daughter genuinely wanted to know more
about my brother, his doctors, this quest to cure childhood leukemia. I guess
it’s another example of how being a parent opens you. I mean I couldn’t really
shrug this off. My daughter wanted to know something important about my past
and it was up to me to find some of those answers. Would I have written such a
personal story, with a steep learning curve for me about medical procedures and
meds, without her request? Probably not. But the fact my daughter wanted to
know made it very important from the get-go.
Another clock is ticking with the
doctors—they were racing to find treatments or even a cure and then when you
decided to write the book, there’s your race to find them and interview them
because they’re getting on in years. Can you talk about those two clocks—the
doctors early careers and talking to them now?
Time
running out or running down in any work creates urgency, heightens things
across the board. I hadn’t planned to have two clocks ticking, they were there,
right in front of me. One was the race to cure a deadly disease before more
kids died. But I soon realized that many of the cancer doctors and nurses were
getting on in years, too. How much longer would they be with us? All of them
were very forthcoming in our conversations because I think they knew when they
passed on much of this incredible success story, the details about a modern
medical miracle, would go with them. Indeed, several of the cancer cowboys died
in the weeks leading up to the book’s release. My hope is some of their message
lives on in these pages.
Early on in the
book, you mention that Cancer Crossings
is a departure for you, being a book that’s focused on medicine instead of
sports. But you have written about teams overcoming obstacles and great odds.
The doctors at Roswell Park certainly qualify as a group of people trying to do
something that nobody thinks they can. What do you think draws you to such
stories?
I’ve
always been intrigued by how successful groups and teams work, especially when
they are made up of different personalities and viewpoints. I think it was F.
Scott Fitzgerald who said writers and artists are drawn to particular stories
or themes. How they are part of our DNA and we have no choice but to keep
returning to them. Early on in writing Cancer
Crossings, a good friend pointed out that I was doing it again. That the
only real difference this time was I focusing on an elite group of doctors
instead of a memorable team of ballplayers or hockey stars. Either way it was a
group of underdogs, only this time they were daring to take on this
shapeshifter of a disease. When he told me that I remember thinking to myself,
“OK, I can do this.”
***
Buy
Cancer Crossings:
More
about Tim Wendel: www.timwendel.com
****
ABOUT MARY KAY
ZURAVLEFF
Mary
Kay Zuravleff’s latest novel, Man Alive!, was named a 2013
Notable Book by The Washington Post. Her essays and
short fiction have appeared in The Atlantic, Los Angeles
Review of Books, American Short Fiction, and The Washington
Post. She is the founder of NoveltyDC, which offers master classes on the
novel and manuscript consultation.
Friday, April 27, 2018
“Follow the Brush”: Vulnerability, Lyricism, and the Art of Creative Nonfiction
An Interview with
Susan Tekulve, author of Second Shift,
Essays of Susan Tekulve
By John Newlin
In her collection of intimate essays entitled Second Shift, Susan Tekulve has crafted
a brilliant series of highly autobiographical pieces. What makes them so powerful is that she
speaks to the universal qualities of beauty, pain, fear, and does so in a way
that makes us see that she is a person/writer/poet who is attentive to her
surroundings and deeply reflective of what she experiences.
JN: Writing anything
at all autobiographical involves taking some risks. One particularly compelling quality of Second
Shift is how deeply personal it is. Your
discussion of your husband Rick’s blindness in one eye and your resulting fear
in “The Plain of Sorrento” is one example.
Another is your willingness to expose your own vulnerabilities in “Just
For Fun” and several other essays. Was
it a struggle to permit yourself to write about those aspects of yourself?
ST: That’s the million-dollar question, John. All writers, but especially nonfiction
writers, have to consider the risks of exposing their vulnerabilities. For me, it’s a matter of intention. In the beginning stages, I think of all my writing
as private because I only feel focused when I write as if nobody is ever going
to read what I’ve written. This is how I trick my mind out of worrying about what
other people think. This kind of worrying kills any piece of writing before I
type the first words. When I begin thinking about an essay or a story as
public, and therefore a piece I might publish, I always consider my
intentions. If the writing in the essay serves
simply as therapy, retribution, or purgation, then I’m wary of my intentions,
and I usually keep that piece private for a while longer. If the writing in the essay turns out
questions I think others will relate to, and invites the reader into a
dialogue, then I’m more likely to consider turning that essay into a public piece
that I’d consider publishing.
JN:…and that leads to
the question of truth versus imagination in the writing of autobiographical
material, doesn’t it?
ST: As I tell my nonfiction students, you have to tell the whole
truth, and sometimes that means giving details about yourself, or others, that
are private. Revealing these kinds of
truths can make you feel extremely vulnerable. However, if your intentions are
to honor and honestly explore yourself, or another human being, then even the
unflattering truths can make your subject more complicated. Keep in mind, too,
that all personal “truths” are really an individual’s perceptions. These perceptions must be as true as
possible, certainly not libelous, and they must be shaped well into an essay,
using language that engages. In other
words, the way we write an essay, the skillful shaping of vulnerable truths will
honor the subject, and help the writer to avoid a simplified spilling of emotions
on the page. Finally, the narrative “I”
of the personal essay must be just as multi-faceted as a well-drawn fictional
character. As with fiction, who really wants
to read about perfect people? Once,
while I was reading Paradise Lost, I began
to wonder why Milton made the characters of Adam and Eve so flat and simple. While I read the parts about Adam and Eve in
paradise, before the fall, I nearly fell into a stupor. Satan, on the other
hand, is a much more conflicted and complicated character. He has the gift of the
gab, as they say, and he articulates his vulnerabilities—his sorrows, fears,
and loss--much more engagingly. But he
is Satan! If I followed the conventional
wisdom, I wasn’t supposed to empathize with Satan. So I asked my husband, who
is a poet, why I preferred Satan’s character over the characters of Adam and
Eve in Paradise Lost. He said, “We like Satan because he most
resembles us.”
What he meant, of course, is that we are all frail and
vulnerable from time to time. As Phillip Lopate writes in The Art of the Personal Essay, some
vulnerability is essential to the personal essay because it would be insincere
to never admit that you are vulnerable.
As Lopate explains, “Unproblematically self-assured, self-contained,
self-satisfied types will not make good essayists.” The skilled reader will turn away from that
narrator. So the struggle, always, with
writing personal essays is how to be self-aware, without being self-absorbed,
callow, insensitive or hurtful to others.
JN: So true. You accomplish making that connection with
the reader by revealing yours (and husband Rick’s) vulnerabilities in this collection,
something that definitely drew my interest.
How does one weigh the pros and cons of self-exposure?
ST: It’s interesting
that you asked whether I had to struggle with giving myself permission to speak
in the essay “Just For Fun.” Of all the
essays in the collection, I struggled the most over how much of my own fear and
discomfort I should reveal. The strange
“gun incident” that launches that essay shook me to my core, and the events
that followed filled me with a tremendous sense of outrage. I started the essay
the day after the incident, and I wrote it straight through. In the first draft there were parts where the
narrative “I” sounds a bit angry. I kept
this piece private for a long time, paralyzed by worries about writing from
this vulnerable stance. Did the
narrative voice of this essay sound shrill, messy, unhinged? Surely there were far more violent crimes
being committed all around me, so what part of my story, which seemed mild
compared to the gun assault stories of others, seemed worthy of a public
discourse? Did I sound like victim? Above all, I didn’t want to write from the
stance of complete victimhood. Being a passive victim narrator would be even
worse than being an angry narrator.
Anger is the most extreme form of vulnerability for me because
it is the absence of control. It can ruin your health if you hold onto it, and
if you write purely from an angry stance it can ruin your writing because it’s
extremely difficult to maintain control from this perspective. Readers don’t
want to be bludgeoned by an uncontrollable stream of another person’s pain and
anger—especially female anger. Unfortunately, we are socially coded to
believe that a woman’s anger and outrage undermines her ability to be heard. We are brought up to feel, perhaps subconsciously,
that female anger is usually irrational, overblown. Female anger sometimes evokes more anger, not
understanding, and certainly not respect.
I recently read an interesting article by Leslie Jamison in The New York Times about female anger
and sadness. Jamison posits that female sadness and rage are two parts of the
same emotion, and that women are still much more likely to reframe themselves
as sad, rather than angry, because our society still views angry women as
harpies and Medusas. Angry women are considered messy and unhinged, and it’s
still widely assumed that their pain is more likely to spin out of control, and
hurt those around them. Sad women, on
the other hand, summon sympathy. They
are typically perceived as self-controlled, elegant, and even desirable—as long
as they don’t get carried away and become eternal victims. In short, the melancholy, meditative female
narrator of an essay is much easier for people to relate to, and read.
About three years passed before I could look at the “Just
For Fun” essay more objectively. By this
time, the gun control debate had become even more volatile, but it had become
more socially acceptable for women to voice their anger. In 2017, when anger
became the dominant emotion across the country, the normative bonds that kept
women from expressing their full-on ire seemed to fall away. Suddenly, angry women
and female characters were being celebrated, rather than ridiculed as hysterics
and paranoids. It began to seem that my
“Just For Fun” essay might actually open a dialogue, rather than shut the
conversation down. I still believe that men and women should be
responsible for their own anger. I still believe we must be careful with
people, always, in life as well as in our writing. But writing that essay
taught me a whole lot about writing from an emotional stance that I used to avoid
entirely.
JN: Particularly impressive to me is the way you
juxtapose at least two seemingly different elements in most of your essays. For example, in “Hell Broth and Poisoned
Entrails” you combine the discussion of traditional fare with the Bubonic
plague!
Well, the juxtaposition in that essay came naturally. I really did go to the whisky shops on the
Royal Mile the first day my husband, son, and I were in Edinburgh. My husband bought me a bottle of lovely, but
deadly, lowland whisky as a gift, and I made the mistake of sipping that whisky
out of an elegant teacup while eating a picnic we made out of the hardy local
Scottish food—mostly organ meats. Around
this time, I’d been reading through all the books on our landlady’s bookshelf. Usually, it’s good to raid the bookshelves of
rental homes or apartments because they often hold books that contain
information that you wouldn’t find in a standard travel guide of a city. Our Scottish landlady was exceptionally
literary. I discovered The Prime of Miss Jean Brodie on her
shelves, and to this day I am a huge fan of Muriel Spark because I discovered
her in Edinburgh, where she was born, and where she set this wonderfully eerie novel. Perhaps I should have read this novel first,
but I read the book about the Bubonic plague instead. When I woke in the middle
of the night, still in a dream state that comes from drinking sweet lowland
whisky while jet lagged, that’s when I diagnosed myself with the Bubonic
plague.
The juxtaposition of those two elements—Scottish cooking and
the Bubonic plague-- came later, after the editors at Serving House Books—Walter
Cummins and Thomas E. Kennedy--sent out a simple yet brilliant prompt to all
the writers who published with their press: Write about the worst meal you ever
experienced. Don’t write about your
day-to-day fare; write about a food you ate under nightmare circumstances. This
prompt was brilliant because when you write about food you are never simply
writing about what’s on your plate.
Food, or the lack of food, holds some of our most intense memories, so
writing about your best, or worst, food experiences allows you to delve into
memories both ecstatic and nightmarish. The prompt also contained the key word
“experience,” which demanded that I shape the food metaphor into a whole
narrative--a story, a poem, or an essay.
JN: This is all excellent advice for the MFA
student learning the craft of writing the personal essay. Please tell us more!
ST: In general, we
use juxtaposition to create metaphor, or to view a subject from a different
perspective. Food writing is one of the easiest ways to create metaphor through
juxtaposition. Writing about a specific food experience, enables you to explore
a whole range of experiences in a more oblique way that can heighten a reader’s
emotional response. MFK Fisher famously
wrote, “There is food in the bowl, and more often than not, because of what
honesty I have, there is nourishment in the heart, to feed the wilder, more
insistent hungers. We must eat. If, in the face of that dread fact, we can
find other nourishment, and tolerance and compassion for it, we’ll be no less
full of human dignity.” When Tom and
Walter sent the food prompt to me, I was in the middle of writing a long novel
that was set in a time and place that was wild, so the hungers of my characters
were wild, and insistent. I was
beginning to realize how emotionally draining it can be to live in the heads of
such characters. I realized that
sometimes it’s just a good idea to take a step back, and stop taking myself so
seriously. While I used the food prompt to write an essay whose goal is to
entertain, the lesson it taught me about the use of juxtaposition has been
lasting.
JN: Details, details,
details. Can you relate to us something
of your process of gathering specific elements?
Is there any specific goal you have in mind before you begin cataloguing
the details---what are you looking to do with these pieces?
ST: A friend of mine
once said--and I believe he was quoting Henry Miller—that a writer collects
details the way a man in a blue serge suit collects lint. If you don’t pick up
details naturally, then there are plenty of fun ways to train yourself to collect
details more deliberately. For instance,
when I know I’m going to write about a place, or the people who inhabit it, I
carry a pocket-sized notebook, and an old Powershot camera. First, I write down all the sensory details
as I experience them. I try to
experience the subject viscerally first, jotting down all the sights, the
textures, the smells, the sounds, and, sometimes, the tastes. Even if I don’t
feel a detail is important at the time, I write it down anyway because often
the less obvious details are the ones that end up being most important. Then, I take out my camera, and compose several
pictures of what I think I’m seeing, hearing, feeling. My old Powershot camera has a great device on
it called “creative shot.” After I’ve
composed the shots of what I think I’ve seen and experienced, I flip the camera
into “creative shot” mode, and the camera automatically composes five
additional photos. Each additional photo
crops the subject from a different angle.
The camera automatically uses different filters, colors, and light. I don’t really share any of these creative
shots with anyone. I just use them to
force myself to look beyond my own initial perceptions, and to collect details
in ways I haven’t seen them before.
You can try this exercise with a regular phone camera too. Go
to a place and write down all the details you experience. Compose some pictures of what you think you
are seeing, and experiencing. Then,
return to your writing space and look at those pictures again. Write about
something that appears on the periphery of the pictures. What’s going on behind your subject, or off
to the side? The less-obvious details
that come to you as a surprise, the ones that recur in your imagination for
reasons you don’t quite understand, are often wellsprings for personal essays and
fiction. Virginia Woolf wrote about this most eloquently in her memoir, Moments of Being. She writes that we spend a good part of every
day not living consciously. We eat,
sleep, and work without paying much attention to what’s going on around
us. Then there are times, which she
calls “Moments of Being,” when we are shocked out of our everyday complacency.
She poses that the “job” of every writer is to learn how to identify metaphor
in these heightened moments of experience.
Once identified, these moments are followed by the desire to explore the
subject by writing about it, and then examining the experience. She believed
that every writer has two selves. The past
self has sensory experiences, often without complete understanding. The present self continually searches the
past, interpreting, evaluating, and shaping the past into essays or
stories. This is the central impulse
behind storytelling, both in fiction and nonfiction.
JN: Wow, such really helpful tips! And they apply equally well to all
genres. I know you write and teach
poetry, as well as non-fiction and fiction, and it’s evident in the often
lyrical quality of these essays. Please
share with us how your background as a poet informs your essays.
ST: Poetry was the
first literary form I studied when I was an undergraduate, so whenever I return
to this form I feel a sense of familiarity, and safety. Often, when I’m trying to explore a new topic
for an essay that feels large and unwieldy, I’ll write it out as a poem first. The use of lyric strategies—the turning of
the line, the concentration on word selection, the juxtaposition of images—de-emphasizes
the sequential and linear, and allows me to get to the emotional center of my
material sooner. Once I find the
emotional core of what I’m exploring, I can de-lineate the original draft or
expand upon it in a more linear way. Or,
sometimes, the lyric structure remains.
I just develop the poem into a long-form essay.
Also, in general, I’ve come to think that the essay form has
much more in common with poetry than it does with fiction. I believe this to be the case because the roots
of the essay are lyric. For instance, the
Japanese writer and Buddhist monk, Kenko, who was writing in the 13th
century, used a random mode of composition known as zuihitsu, which translates
as “follow the brush.” He, and his
counterparts, were downright suspicious of narrative forms because they
believed that formlessness was more sincere.
Once something was put into a linear, narrative form it was no longer
the truth. So Kenko’s essays skip from
subject to subject, without any obvious links.
Today’s lyric essay, which is basically an extended lyric poem, relies
upon those same lyric brushstrokes, the same density of language, the same use
of compression as a poem requires.
Anyway, the concept of the personal essay as purely a linear
narrative form is relatively recent. The roots of essay writing are much more expansive
and flexible, which could be why I’m drawn to writing them in the same way that
I’m drawn to writing poetry.
JN: That makes terrific sense! Susan, I’m fascinated to know a little bit
about your next writing projects.
ST: I’m in the middle
of an ongoing travel and food-writing project that involves researching and
recording intangible heritage sites that can be found in the small towns of Southern
Italy. Unlike tangible heritage sites, like monuments or museums, the
intangibles are customs that are handed down through generations. There is a
whole biosphere on the Cilento Coast that is protected by UNESCO for its
intangibles, which include the anchovy fishing techniques that were brought
over by the Greeks 3,000 years ago, the shoulder-borne saint processions, and
even the traditional ways of making of some foods that are a part of the
Mediterranean diet. These customs rely upon
communal memory, and the transmission of information from one generation to the
next. As the members of the older
generation who remember these customs die out, and their children and
grandchildren scatter north to find employment in bigger cities, whole
communities risk forgetting these traditions.
Our memories, personal and communal, form our identities, so if we lose
them we forget who we are. It’s this idea of memory, personal and
communal, that I hope to explore in a more concrete way through the food and
travel experiences.
JN: Susan, thank you so much. One doesn’t have to sit in one of your craft
classes to see how brilliant an instructor you must be.
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ABOUT JOHN NEWLIN
John Newlin earned his MFA at Converse College (SC). His reviews and essays have appeared in Night Owl, Independent School, and South
85, where he is Review Editor. He
also writes reviews for the New York
Journal of Books.
ABOUT SUSAN TEKULVE
Susan Tekulve is the author of In the Garden of Stone, winner of the 2012 South Carolina First Novel Prize and a 2014 Gold IPPY Award. She’s also published two short story collections: Savage Pilgrims and My Mother’s War Stories. Her stories and essays have appeared in Shenandoah,The Georgia Review, New Letters, Best New Writing 2007, The Indiana Review, Denver Quarterly, Puerto del Sol, Prairie Schooner, North Dakota Quarterly, Connecticut Review, Beloit Fiction Journal, Crab Orchard Review, The Literary Review, Web Del Sol, Black Warrior Review, and The Kansas City Star. She has been awarded a Sewanee Writers’ Conference Scholarship and a Bread Loaf Writers’ Conference Scholarship. An Associate Professor of English, she teaches in the BFA and MFA in creative writing programs at Converse College.
ABOUT SUSAN TEKULVE
Susan Tekulve is the author of In the Garden of Stone, winner of the 2012 South Carolina First Novel Prize and a 2014 Gold IPPY Award. She’s also published two short story collections: Savage Pilgrims and My Mother’s War Stories. Her stories and essays have appeared in Shenandoah,The Georgia Review, New Letters, Best New Writing 2007, The Indiana Review, Denver Quarterly, Puerto del Sol, Prairie Schooner, North Dakota Quarterly, Connecticut Review, Beloit Fiction Journal, Crab Orchard Review, The Literary Review, Web Del Sol, Black Warrior Review, and The Kansas City Star. She has been awarded a Sewanee Writers’ Conference Scholarship and a Bread Loaf Writers’ Conference Scholarship. An Associate Professor of English, she teaches in the BFA and MFA in creative writing programs at Converse College.
Thursday, April 26, 2018
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Wednesday, April 25, 2018
Some Scraps of SILVER GIRL News & One Additional Thing
SILVER GIRL is now available on audio,
through Audible.com. You can access an audio version on Amazon or directly from Audible.
And check Curtis Brown Ltd. on Instagram on Thursday, April 26, 2018, when they will be giving away a free audiobook edition!!
*****
Speaking of social media, if you’re on Facebook,
check out this conversation and reading on FB Live!, with Patricia Smith at Chop Suey
Books in Richmond, VA. I’m good enough, but Wonton the cat is the real star of
this show!
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I will be offering another one of my prompt
writing classes at Politics & Prose Bookstore in June. The theme is
especially interesting this time, “The Art of Losing,” guided, of course, but
Elizabeth Bishop’s iconic villanelle “One Art.” (If you don’t know what I’m
talking about, drop everything and read it here
immediately, and if you do know, reread it just because.)
These classes often sell out, so don’t wait too
long.
Wednesday, June 13
6:30 p.m.– 9 p.m.
Class ~ Right Brain Writing: The Art of Losing
Politics & Prose
Washington, DC
Explore your creative side in this session, one of
a series of stand-alone classes with prompts designed to get your subconscious
flowing. Through guided exercises, we’ll focus on writing about the variety of
losses we have encountered in our lives, the large and small absences that
inform our landscape. Elizabeth Bishop calls it “the art of losing”; where is
the art in saying goodbye? No writing experience necessary! This is a great
class for beginners and also for those fiction writers and/or memoirists with
more experience who might be stuck in their current projects and are looking
for a jolt of inspiration. Our
goal is to have fun in a supportive, nurturing environment and to go home with
several promising pieces to work on further.
Please bring lots of paper and pen/pencil or a fully charged computer. Note:
new exercises!
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